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Sunday, July 02, 2006

An Eye Opener-II

Didi, kuch khaane ke liye hai?(Sister, are there any leftovers?) Large beseeching black eyes on an emaciated face. A dusty contour. Those faces still come back to me like I’d seen them yesterday. Smudged dark spots on their hollow cheeks proved that food was scarce—on most nights. Their ribs protruded out of their skin like the stumps of the trees stand out in the backdrop after a massive forest fire. No slippers on their feet, no clothes on their body except a tiny piece of cloth that covered their waist & part of their legs. There they stood: a band of three very young boys with scratched grimy steel bowls.
She stood there in a gleaming white shirt & black corduroy trousers looking over them and she had never felt worst. The rich did infact did get richer and the poor poorer. She fumbled through her pockets and brought out two 5-rupee coins. With a smile she handed it over to them while saying “Dukaan jaake chocolate ya kuch khareed lena..abhi toh mere paas aur kuch nahi hai
If you have ever had the fortune of watching the Sun rising as it banishes shadows out of every niche & corner, this was precisely how those boys’ faces metamorphosed as wide grins lite up their faces. It was evident that they had never received any sympathy lèst such benevolence of heart. Off they ran to the local store & picked out the kind they wanted.
She couldn’t help but laugh after them.

And so everytime after that they saw her they salaamed and skipped over to say hello. Never to ask for money or food mind you; but for the acceptance & gratification they felt for the very first time where before they had stones cast at them. They were mocked, ridiculed & made little of. They were just those boys that wandered in a meaningless existence.
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--Incidents like these drastically change how you perceive life: at first I had a hawk eye’s view where I was blissfully unaware. I soared above & was content doing that. I really did not want to swoop down below & come face-to-face with the veracity of things. Now I have a microscopic one. Where the harsher realities come into focus as I turn the fine focus knob. And it creates a sharp image of discontent.

8 Comments:

Blogger The_Mask_Man said:

Another feather in the cap. A well written simple post with the alot of depth as always. Even before i started reading this post, i knew i was going to feel as terrible as i did after i read An Eye Opener 1 and believe it or not i certainly did. The harsh realities in these posts are definitly an eye opener.

"Aaj Bhi Agar Tera Khoon Na Khola, Khoon Nahin Woh Paani Hai. Desh Ke Jo Kaam Na Aaye, Bekaar Woh Jawaani Hai"

10:44 AM

 
Blogger vikRAM said:

"If you have ever had the fortune of watching the Sun rising as it banishes shadows out of every niche & corner, this was precisely how those boys’ faces..."

Really loved this comparison. A very honest portrayal of what one feels in such situations.
Another skillfully written post from a master writer!

3:36 PM

 
Blogger Surabhi said:

Thanks the_mask_man & Vikram!
I have observed over a period of 2 years(since I've been blogging) that it is easier to potray something that I have experienced rather than something described to me/that I read.

6:47 AM

 
Blogger ....R.A.J.A.... said:

exactly as Vikram said, very skillful writing :-)

7:34 PM

 
Blogger Surabhi said:

Thanks Raja!

9:34 PM

 
Blogger Deepali said:

it's a been a while you know.

*nudges*

11:06 AM

 
Blogger dhruv said:

Hi surabhi log time it has been..how r u doing??? i am damn busy these days with the new job on... i came accross a nice article... something relating to ur taste and to india....do read it (its a bit long but worth it ... and do forward the article..i wish every indian livin abroad read the article.
http://www.atc.tcs.co.in/~sagar/slime.html

12:38 AM

 
Blogger Aviral said:

Hello, Nanku.

Kemon aachho tumi. Mi khub bhaalo.

These all incidents are true on one hand. But as being a member of three different NGOs, I'd been working for betterment of the poor. During my projects in the slum area, I came to know that these children, who beg for money alongside the roads, are not the true hunger sufferers, but they are made to beg by their masters. Their masters hire these children for a few thousand rupees and train them for BEGGING. These children are from those families who have no elder females in house i.e. mother, grandma, etc. These children are being forced to their masters by their father or their guardians. Thus it’s better to give them shelter and educate them by taking the help of different NGOs. We are trying to eradicate beggars at least from this city as we are limited to the boundaries of Ahmedabad and the monetary limitations. So please help us if you have any contacts with NGOs in other cities.

Regards,
AVIRAL MEDIRATTA
Management Trainee, CMBU
Tata Tele Services - Ahmedabad

4:45 PM

 

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